Fire Prevention on Campus

　　1. 前段時(shí)間校園火災(zāi)頻發(fā)，造成生命和財(cái)產(chǎn)損失

　　2. 分析火災(zāi)發(fā)生的原因

　　3. 作為學(xué)生，如何預(yù)防校園火災(zāi)發(fā)生

　　審題概述

　　這是一分析火災(zāi)原因和如何預(yù)防火災(zāi)為中心的文章，撰寫(xiě)時(shí)重點(diǎn)即在于此。開(kāi)篇綜述校園火災(zāi)頻發(fā)情形及造成的生命和財(cái)產(chǎn)損失，然后說(shuō)明火災(zāi)原因，最后提出可能的火災(zāi)預(yù)防措施。第一段，主要概述;第二段，說(shuō)明原因;第三段，詳細(xì)論述措施。

　　【范文】

　　Fire Prevention on Campus

　　People are alarmed by the succession of campus fires in recent years. In each of these accidents, heavy casualties were reported - houses were burned down, students lost their lives, and properties were damaged. Faced with such a chilling fact, people keep asking, What on earth results in these repeated tragedies?

　　A brief survey of them reveals that human factors still prove to be the leading causes. For example, three of these fires were caused by the students use of electric water-heaters. As students often leave the heaters unattended, the risks are rather high should the water in the bottle boil dry while no one is around to turn off the power. In other cases, fires were also caused by stoves, candles, cigarette butts, etc.

　　Since most of these disasters could have been prevented if proper precautions had been taken, students should be better educated on the importance and measures of fire control. The following three reminders are of particular importance for us students: First, learn how to use a fire extinguisher. Second, double-check andles, heaters, stoves and other electric appliances, and make sure there are no open flames before leaving rooms. Lastly, do not smoke in the dorm.

　　第一段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：

　　概述并引入下文

　　語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)提示：

　　此句What on earth results in these repeated tragedies??？勺鳛檫^(guò)渡句，引出下文

　　注意描述有關(guān)火災(zāi)客觀事實(shí)，多使用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，如are alarmed by，were reported，were burned down，were damaged，F(xiàn)aced with。

　　第二段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：

　　論述火災(zāi)的主要原因是使用電熱水器，還有造成火災(zāi)的次要原因是實(shí)用電爐、蠟燭和亂扔煙蒂，

　　語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)提示：

　　electric water-heaters電熱水器

　　第三段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：

　　詳述預(yù)防火災(zāi)的三點(diǎn)措施，注意使用連接詞語(yǔ)first, second, lastly。

　　語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)提示：

　　take precautions采取預(yù)防措施

　　fire extinguisher滅火器 Enhance Awareness to Guard against Campus Thefts

　　1.校園盜竊案件時(shí)有發(fā)生

　　2.物品被盜的原因

　　3.學(xué)生如何加強(qiáng)防盜意識(shí)

　　審題概述

　　這是一篇論述校園物品被盜和加強(qiáng)防盜意識(shí)的文章。第一段，主要陳述校園盜竊案件發(fā)生的情況。第二段，主要分析校園物品被盜的原因。第三段，主要闡述學(xué)生怎樣增強(qiáng)防盜意識(shí)。

　　【范文】

　　Enhance Awareness to Guard against Campus Thefts

　　If you dont want to wake up and find you have no pants to wear, youd better put them on in sleep, goes a popular joke among students. Obviously, campus thefts have become increasingly annoying as they occur far more often than before. And it seems that the thieves are less choosy these days, with their targets ranging widely from bikes, cell phones, purses, pre-paid IC cards to sunglasses, bags, and even underwear. In short, anything that worth a dime is likely to be stolen.

　　What makes students the easy targets? The reasons are not hard to find. But I believe of all these reasons, the lack of anti-theft alertness is the most important. For lack of alertness, the students tend to leave the doors and windows wide open during sleep at noon or at night in summer. For the same reason, theyll also leave their bikes unlocked before a store or by a road, or forget to take away their personal stuff before they go out of the classroom to make a phone call. These acts undoubtedly have increased their exposure to the light-fingered monsters.

　　In order to minimize possible losses, the students must stay on guard in the first place, as awareness of the thefts around often makes a big difference. To be more specific, the students should not hide any tempting amount of cash in the dorm. Put it in the bank instead. Besides, do not leave any valuable items unattended. Take them wherever you go. In addition, its advisable to develop a neighbourhood watch programme with other students in the dorm and neighbouring dorms.

　　第一段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：

　　陳述校園盜竊案件發(fā)生的情況

　　語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)提示：

　　it seems that此句型表示一種可能性

　　第二段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：

　　說(shuō)明被盜原因

　　語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)提示：

　　What makes students the easy targets?此句引出下文

　　anti-theft alertness防盜意識(shí)

　　lack of alertness缺乏警惕

　　light-fingered小偷小摸的、慣行扒竊的

　　第三段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：

　　闡述如何加強(qiáng)防盜意識(shí)

　　語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)提示：

　　注意關(guān)聯(lián)詞語(yǔ)in the first place，Besides，In addition的使用可使行文更富邏輯性。

　　How Will Our Life Go on without Internet?

　　1.網(wǎng)絡(luò)提供給了人們豐富多彩和便捷的生活

　　2.很多人開(kāi)始感覺(jué)離開(kāi)網(wǎng)絡(luò)寸步難行

　　3.你對(duì)網(wǎng)絡(luò)依賴癥的看法

　　審題概述

　　本文是一篇論述你對(duì)網(wǎng)絡(luò)與人們生活關(guān)系的文章。第一段，側(cè)重簡(jiǎn)述網(wǎng)絡(luò)給人們生活的多彩、便利。第二段，詳述網(wǎng)絡(luò)與人們生活的緊密度。第三段，論述對(duì)網(wǎng)絡(luò)依賴的觀點(diǎn)。

　　【范文1】

　　How Will Our Life Go on without Internet?

　　If asked whether the Internet is the greatest discovery of the 20th century, my answer would be yes. The Internet has drawn the world closer together, realized countless incredible dreams, and provided modern people with a great many conveniences and a brilliant life.

　　Today, many people simply feel they cannot live without the Internet. Governments publish their latest policies and decisions online for worldwide recognition. Political campaigns are often done online to gain wider public support. Companies and enterprises resort to the Internet for more business opportunities and potential customers home and abroad. Universities and researchers turn to the Internet if theyd seek international cooperation or funding. Common folks like us also rely on the cyber world in various ways, for communication, entertainment, banking and shopping.

　　True, the power of the Internet is all pervasive and its many negative effects are already visible. For example, Internet addicts tend to withdraw to their own fantasy world rather than communicate with a real person. Children are exposed to online pornography ?and violence. Internet frauds are an everyday occurrence. In view of all this, you are advised to use the Internet with wisdom. Keep it at a safe distance and never lose yourself.

　　第一段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：

　　綜述網(wǎng)絡(luò)給人們生活帶來(lái)的多彩和便捷。兩個(gè)長(zhǎng)句足矣。第一句用if引導(dǎo)的條件句引出網(wǎng)絡(luò)話題，第二句概述網(wǎng)絡(luò)帶給多彩和便捷的生活。

　　語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)提示：

　　has drawn..., realized, and provided此為謂語(yǔ)連動(dòng)式的運(yùn)用。

　　第二段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：

　　詳述網(wǎng)絡(luò)與人們生活的緊密關(guān)系，先總述，后分述。

　　語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)提示：

　　resort to借助、訴諸、求助于

　　第三段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：

　　先陳述人們對(duì)網(wǎng)絡(luò)的依賴，再談對(duì)此的看法。

　　語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)提示：

　　negative effects副作用、反面作用

　　addicts成癮者、依戀者

　　fantasy world虛擬世界、虛幻世界

　　pornography色情表演、色情作品

　　fraud欺騙、詐騙

　　【范文2】

　　As a primary source of information as well as an efficient means of communication, the Internet offers people a colourful and convenient life. Just by clicking the mouse, we can enjoy a brilliant and easy life that could not be achieved ever before: shopping, making friends, contacting relatives, looking for jobs, downloading music and movies, conducting business deals, and freely airing our opinions.

　　For its convenience, the Internet has attracted people like magnets and some people even claim that it is indispensable. To them, life cant go on without it. Every day millions of people spend hours on end surfing the Internet. They are obsessed with it so much so that they forget many other important matters.

　　As for me, I dont approve of unrestrained Internet reliance. Although the Internet is a gift of the technological revolution and a blessing of this information age, we should never let it control our life. The Internet absolutely doesnt mean the whole world to us. Instead, we should guard against its negative effects. To those Internet addicts, I would add: Self-control can make or break your life. With proper use, the Internet serves you; otherwise, it kills you.

　　Craze for Civil Service Examinations

　　1.現(xiàn)在有越來(lái)越多的大學(xué)畢業(yè)生報(bào)考公務(wù)員

　　2.引起此現(xiàn)象的原因

　　3.你的看法

　　審題概述

　　本文是一篇主要論述大學(xué)生報(bào)考公務(wù)員增多的原因和對(duì)此看法的文章。第一段，主要綜述大學(xué)生報(bào)考公務(wù)員增多的現(xiàn)象。第二段，側(cè)重分析引起此現(xiàn)象的原因。第三段，重點(diǎn)談你對(duì)此的觀點(diǎn)。

　　【范文】

　　Craze for Civil Service Examinations

　　Every year hundreds of thous ands of people in China take civil service exams conducted at various levels in the hope of becoming government employees. Among them, college graduates are a fast-growing force that cant be ignored. The craze for being a civil servant is not limited to liberal arts majors, as its also gaining popularity among science and engineering students.

　　In the final analysis, this growing trend among the youngsters is mainly attributable to two factors - ambitions and comforts. On the one hand, many ambitious college graduates view these exams as a springboard to a higher social status, greater power and prestige, on which many of their other wishes rest. On the other, as being a civil servant generally means a stable income, enviable healthcare and pension programmes, as well as other comforts of life, its quite an appealing career option to many people, especially in this age of sluggish world economy.

　　Personally, the desire to be a government official is beyond reproach, as the nation and the people do need an injection of new blood into the civil service sectors. The fresh-faced college graduates, armed with lofty ideals, new vision, and strong drive, are undoubtedly among the best candidates.

　　第一段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：

　　第一句總述人們蜂擁參加公務(wù)員招考，第二句點(diǎn)明大學(xué)生是其中的主力軍，第三句再述熱衷于公務(wù)員報(bào)考的大學(xué)生不僅有文科的，還有理工科的。

　　語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)提示：

　　liberal arts majors文科專(zhuān)業(yè)學(xué)生

　　第二段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：

　　先總述引起大學(xué)生熱衷報(bào)考公務(wù)員的兩點(diǎn)因素，再詳細(xì)分述。

　　語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)提示：

　　On the one hand...On the other起到銜接上文作用

　　is attributable to歸因于

　　sluggish world economy衰退的世界經(jīng)濟(jì)

　　第三段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：

　　重點(diǎn)談對(duì)大學(xué)生熱衷報(bào)考公務(wù)員的觀點(diǎn)。

　　語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)提示：

　　beyond reproach無(wú)可厚非

　　Is it Necessary to Attend Training Classes?

　　1.現(xiàn)在社會(huì)上有各種各樣的培訓(xùn)班

　　2.有些人認(rèn)為有必要參加課外培訓(xùn)班，有些人則認(rèn)為沒(méi)有必要

　　3.你的觀點(diǎn)

　　審題概述

　　這是一篇主要論述人們和你對(duì)社會(huì)上各類(lèi)培訓(xùn)班看法的文章。第一段，概述各種各樣培

　　訓(xùn)班的狀況。第二段，論述人們對(duì)參加課外培訓(xùn)班的不同看法。第三段，重點(diǎn)闡述你對(duì)此的看法。

　　【范文】

　　Is it Necessary to Attend Training Classes?

　　All across the country a great diversity of custom-made classes are mushrooming, in which special training is provided concerning computer skills, arts, sports, and other extracurricular specialties like maths and writing. Among them language crash courses for various tests, such as CET, BEC, TOFEL, IELTS, GRE and so forth, are especially noticeable for its wide range and high attendance rate.

　　Some consider it advisable to attend such classes while others believe it unnecessary. The former argues that its far more effective to command these special skills with the help of an experienced trainer than to work at them on their own. They are convinced that these training classes can make up for what is not taught in school, hence, more competitive edge over their peers. The latter group of people, nonetheless, criticize it as a sheer waste of resources. They warn that the quality of most training courses is questionable, as they are marketed to get money out of our pocket rather than get knowledge into our head.

　　As far as I am concerned, a little bit of such special training does us no harm, but too much of it can only prove to be counter-productive. Anyhow, the deprived free time can be better invested in recreation at weekends, talking to an old friend, or simply enjoying a long-overdue vacation.

　　第一段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：

　　第一句綜述社會(huì)上提供知識(shí)、技能服務(wù)的各類(lèi)培訓(xùn)班雨后春筍般興起，第二句例舉語(yǔ)言速成課程特別火爆。

　　語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)提示：

　　a great diversity of各種各樣的

　　mushrooming迅速擴(kuò)散、增加

　　language crash courses語(yǔ)言速成課程

　　第二段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：

　　先用一句對(duì)比式地?cái)[出兩種不同的觀點(diǎn)，再分別詳述他們的看法。

　　語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)提示：

　　注意連接詞語(yǔ)while，The former，They，The latter group of people等的使用，強(qiáng)化了上下文之間的連貫性。

　　第三段思路點(diǎn)評(píng)：

　　辯證地論述你對(duì)參加各類(lèi)培訓(xùn)班的看法。

　　語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)提示：

　　as far as I am concerned我認(rèn)為，就我而言

　　counter-productive適得其反的、事與愿違的

　　University Students Pursuit of Famous Brands

　　1. 現(xiàn)在很多大學(xué)生都追求穿名牌，用名牌

　　2. 你對(duì)這種現(xiàn)象的看法

　　審題概述

　　這是一篇論述對(duì)大學(xué)生追求和使用名牌看法的文章。第一段，詳述大學(xué)生熱衷追求、使

　　用名牌的情形以及人們的看法。第二段，重點(diǎn)談你對(duì)此的看法。

　　【范文】

　　University Students Pursuit of Famous Brands

　　What perfumes are you wearing? Arent your shoes Nikes latest release? I like the Mickey bag you bought yesterday. I hear the Jack Jones store is on sale this week. Do you wanna come along? Dont feel surprised if you hear them coming out of the mouth of college students. Its quite common to hear and see college students swapping information about the brands they like and the products they use. In fact, discussions about brand names have become one of the college students favourite pastimes. They learn about the latest fashion from each other, exchange tips about when and where to get the item, and buy it at their earliest convenience. Keeping up with the Joneses is their conviction - If the Joneses have it, how could I have not?

　　About this current mindset of the college students, many people may hasten to show their disapproval. Theyll probably take it to be a reflection of the students vanity and superficiality. And they may lecture them on the virtue of being thrifty.

　　However, I beg to differ. For one thing, name-brand products are usually quality products. As such, they are something beautiful, endurable, and reliable. The love of beauty is common to all, goes the proverb; therefore, theres nothing to blame about the pursuit of famous brands. For the other, college students are old enough to make their own decisions. Likewise, they must abide by the consequences if they make an ill-advised one. If they let their pursuit of brands eat into their budget for other more important issues, they should be able to correct their mistakes and keep everything in moderation. So this becomes no other than a good chance to learn management, isnt it?