My View on Double BA Degree

　　1. 現(xiàn)在大學(xué)生讀雙學(xué)位的現(xiàn)象很常見

　　2. 我對這一現(xiàn)象的看法

　　【范文】

　　Recently it has become a common phenomenon for college students to have two majors at the same time. In thisway, they can get double BA degrees when they graduate from the university several years later.

　　Although it may bring unfavorable consequences, we can be sure to conclude that this practice is favorable on thewhole. To begin with, most students will become more hardworking and efficient in order to finish the learning taskssatisfactorily. Moreover, with two degrees at hand after graduation, they will stand a better chance in the job market fullof fierce competition. In the third place, as for todays university students, tuition and fees are becoming more andmore expensive. If they can make achievements in study at school and find a satisfactory job afterwards, it will not be a big problem.

　　Weighing the pros and cons of such a new trend, we can naturally arrive at the conclusion that it is beneficial and rewarding. This system not only compels students to work hard, but also prepares them for the coming competition.

　　【點評】

　　首段直接點題，說明現(xiàn)象;第二段分述三個優(yōu)點，其中首句為讓步狀語從句，意思是雖然可能帶來負(fù)面的后果，但總體上是有益的第三段呼應(yīng)第二段，得出結(jié)論。

　　范文首段提出大學(xué)生讀雙學(xué)位這一普遍現(xiàn)象;第二段分三點進(jìn)行論述，其中前兩點是優(yōu)點，即學(xué)生會更加勤奮，并且有利于他們在激烈的求職市場中找到工作，最后一點是解釋可能帶來的學(xué)費問題并不嚴(yán)重;第三段下結(jié)論，呼應(yīng)第二段。

　　第二段第三句中的stand a better chance表示大有希望第三段末句中的compel sb.to do sth.表示迫使某人做某事。

　　My View on Double BA Degree

　　1. 現(xiàn)在大學(xué)生讀雙學(xué)位的現(xiàn)象很常見

　　2. 我對這一現(xiàn)象的看法

　　【范文】

　　Recently it has become a common phenomenon for college students to have two majors at the same time. In thisway, they can get double BA degrees when they graduate from the university several years later.

　　Although it may bring unfavorable consequences, we can be sure to conclude that this practice is favorable on thewhole. To begin with, most students will become more hardworking and efficient in order to finish the learning taskssatisfactorily. Moreover, with two degrees at hand after graduation, they will stand a better chance in the job market fullof fierce competition. In the third place, as for todays university students, tuition and fees are becoming more andmore expensive. If they can make achievements in study at school and find a satisfactory job afterwards, it will not be a big problem.

　　Weighing the pros and cons of such a new trend, we can naturally arrive at the conclusion that it is beneficial and rewarding. This system not only compels students to work hard, but also prepares them for the coming competition.

　　【點評】

　　首段直接點題，說明現(xiàn)象;第二段分述三個優(yōu)點，其中首句為讓步狀語從句，意思是雖然可能帶來負(fù)面的后果，但總體上是有益的第三段呼應(yīng)第二段，得出結(jié)論。

　　范文首段提出大學(xué)生讀雙學(xué)位這一普遍現(xiàn)象;第二段分三點進(jìn)行論述，其中前兩點是優(yōu)點，即學(xué)生會更加勤奮，并且有利于他們在激烈的求職市場中找到工作，最后一點是解釋可能帶來的學(xué)費問題并不嚴(yán)重;第三段下結(jié)論，呼應(yīng)第二段。

　　第二段第三句中的stand a better chance表示大有希望第三段末句中的compel sb.to do sth.表示迫使某人做某事。