作文在英語六級考試中占有非常重要的位置，但是很多考生在備考時總會發(fā)現(xiàn)自己寫的句子不夠精彩。那么在最后的備考時間里，各位考生應(yīng)該多看范文，學(xué)習(xí)范文中的詞匯和語句，這樣能夠提高復(fù)習(xí)效率，在考試中取得好成績。

　　題目：On Blind-date Show

　　1、 目前電視相親節(jié)目很流行

　　2、 出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因是：

　　3、 我對此的看法

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　　Turning on TV, you can watch blind-date shows on many channels. According to survey, such program ranks among top three for all age groups, becoming a necessary part of their life.

　　This phenomenon, first of all, reflexes the change of mind about love and date, which used to be serious and private. Nowadays, love can be discussed and showed in public and most people, especially youngsters, regard date as a kind of entertainment or game. In addition, there is an increasing number of single men and women, due to their narrow network, haveto resort to blind-date show. Another notable trend is that advertisements find such programs as excellent platform to show their products such as perfume, dresses and cosmetics. They are therefore willing to sponsor.

　　In my opinion, blind date shows do not truly help people in establishing relationship and getting someone to get married. As far as I know, many people are like actors and actresses, whose job is to recite scripts they are given. These programs may, to great degree, ruin the purity of love in the long run.

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　　劃線句子里，is是句子的謂語動詞了，因此就不能再用have了，要么你去掉there be，要么把后面的have改成having.

　　作文在英語六級考試中占有非常重要的位置，但是很多考生在備考時總會發(fā)現(xiàn)自己寫的句子不夠精彩。那么在最后的備考時間里，各位考生應(yīng)該多看范文，學(xué)習(xí)范文中的詞匯和語句，這樣能夠提高復(fù)習(xí)效率，在考試中取得好成績。

　　題目：On Blind-date Show

　　1、 目前電視相親節(jié)目很流行

　　2、 出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因是：

　　3、 我對此的看法

　　高分作文+點評：

　　高分作文：

　　Turning on TV, you can watch blind-date shows on many channels. According to survey, such program ranks among top three for all age groups, becoming a necessary part of their life.

　　This phenomenon, first of all, reflexes the change of mind about love and date, which used to be serious and private. Nowadays, love can be discussed and showed in public and most people, especially youngsters, regard date as a kind of entertainment or game. In addition, there is an increasing number of single men and women, due to their narrow network, haveto resort to blind-date show. Another notable trend is that advertisements find such programs as excellent platform to show their products such as perfume, dresses and cosmetics. They are therefore willing to sponsor.

　　In my opinion, blind date shows do not truly help people in establishing relationship and getting someone to get married. As far as I know, many people are like actors and actresses, whose job is to recite scripts they are given. These programs may, to great degree, ruin the purity of love in the long run.

　　點評：

　　高分作文!!!

　　劃線句子里，is是句子的謂語動詞了，因此就不能再用have了，要么你去掉there be，要么把后面的have改成having.