寫作原文

　　As is vividly betrayed in the drawing above, a newly-married couple are hugging each other happily and their parents are holding a huge amount of debt hardly. In addition, there is one sentence Establish their own happiness on the basis of parents hardship, which lighlightsthat nowadays many young penple are seeking for their own happiness despite their parents feeling. So what causes this phenomenon?From my point of view, there are mainly two reasons. First, with the promotion of Family planning, many families have one child only, which makes the child so spoilt that they are used to the high quality life. Second, many children has the psychology of comparison, which makes them have the wish to hold a luxurious wedding ceremony.In order to solve this problem, children should develop the virtue of thrifty. As marriage is a lifetime matter, it will not be changed because of their wedding ceremony is luxurious or not. So they should refuse luxurious wedding ceremony. Futhermore, parents should not spoil their children by satisfy their all demands. I think under the joint effort of parents and children, the ethos of keeping up with the joneses will be decreased significantly

　　總體點評

　　整體來說，文章構思不錯;考研作文的整體思路你已經基本掌握，但還存在一些語法錯誤及漢語式英語的表達。后面要做的就是鞏固語法知識，多積累高分佳句并不斷模仿，弱化漢語思維對英語寫作的影響，并為自己的文章增彩;再者，寫完之后一定要認真檢查，減少失分點。加油吧，祝你考研成功!

　　寫作原文

　　As is vividly betrayed in the drawing above, a newly-married couple are hugging each other happily and their parents are holding a huge amount of debt hardly. In addition, there is one sentence Establish their own happiness on the basis of parents hardship, which lighlightsthat nowadays many young penple are seeking for their own happiness despite their parents feeling. So what causes this phenomenon?From my point of view, there are mainly two reasons. First, with the promotion of Family planning, many families have one child only, which makes the child so spoilt that they are used to the high quality life. Second, many children has the psychology of comparison, which makes them have the wish to hold a luxurious wedding ceremony.In order to solve this problem, children should develop the virtue of thrifty. As marriage is a lifetime matter, it will not be changed because of their wedding ceremony is luxurious or not. So they should refuse luxurious wedding ceremony. Futhermore, parents should not spoil their children by satisfy their all demands. I think under the joint effort of parents and children, the ethos of keeping up with the joneses will be decreased significantly

　　總體點評

　　整體來說，文章構思不錯;考研作文的整體思路你已經基本掌握，但還存在一些語法錯誤及漢語式英語的表達。后面要做的就是鞏固語法知識，多積累高分佳句并不斷模仿，弱化漢語思維對英語寫作的影響，并為自己的文章增彩;再者，寫完之后一定要認真檢查，減少失分點。加油吧，祝你考研成功!