2024高考英語二輪書面表達訓練:圖文作文(26)
訓練(26)及參考范文
高考英語寫作,即根據提示進行書面表達,有效的組織自己的思想,自己的邏輯,正確地運用語文載體,連貫地傳遞信息,表達意思,有效運用所學語言知識。高考英語書面表達是英語考試的重頭戲之一,而且非常適合考前集中突破。高考英語作文題目的命題歷來是“情理之中,意料之外”。“情理之中”即高考英語寫作皆是“學生話題、現實生活、熱點焦點話題”;“意料之外”則指高考英語作文題目經常與考生直接關心的社會熱點話題無直接聯系,但仔細琢磨,又會發現一些聯系,就是說“熱點歸熱點,關鍵找角度”。注意:1)要把原文的內容表達的清楚,順暢2) 字數一定要達到要求3)符合出題者的要求4)復合句、高級詞匯的使用。
要求考生必須把以下范文背誦并默寫過,高考時則可根據實際進行套用,大腦提取信息,信手拈來高分!
二、話題:節假日活動(Festivals,Holidays and Celebrations)
【預測試題5】慶祝節日——【圖表類】【議論文】
近年來,國內很多年輕人熱衷過“圣誕節”、“情人節”等外國節日。就這個問題,最近我們班進行了一場熱烈的討論口一些人贊成,一些人反對。
贊成的同學認為 反對的同學認為
1、隨著社會的發展,世界各國之間的聯系日益增多,文化之間的傳播也越來越多。過外國節日,有利于理解外國文化。
2、過外國節日有利于與外國朋友交流,增加相互了解和友誼。
3、過外國節日是一種時尚,是另一種娛樂的方式。 1、我們應該保持民族特色,過好我們自己的節日。如:春節。
2、有些年輕人熱衷于過外國節日,卻忘記自己的節日。
3、我們應該致力于傳播中國文化,讓更多的外國人過中國節日。
圖表寫作是高考常用的形式之一,“過外國節日的話題”淺顯易懂,其切入點與高中生的生活實際貼近,而且具有一定的開放性,使得每個學生都能夠有話可說口符合高考的命題方向。
圖表作文是近幾年高考常選的命題方式之一。在高考中常以兩種方式對學生進行考查,一種是文字表格式,另一種是柱形或餅形圖式。
●文字表格式
文字表格式作文的體裁相對穩定,以說明文、議論文為主,輔之以記敘文。題材豐富多樣,有書信、發言稿、產品介紹等,通常情況下,試題明確規定了所使用的寫作格式。因此,考生只需根據表格里的提示內容,確定所要表達的寫作要點,運用自己所掌握的句型和詞匯知識,做到要點齊全、語句通順、條理清楚、表達明確、思路靈活、書寫工整。
寫作模板
1、利弊型
Recently, our class have had a heated discussion on whether
(作文主題). Opinions vary from person to person/Opinions are divided among students.
Some people think it necessary to
(正方觀點). For one thing,
.(理由一). For another,
.(理由二).
On the other hand, others hold the opposite opinion. From their point of view,
(反方理由一). What's more,
(反方理由二).
In my opinion, I support/oppose the idea that
(作文主題).
(你的理由).
2. 觀點對比型
Recently, a survey has been carried out in our school on whether
(作文主題).
As can be seen from the result of the survey, opinions are divided. About
(持有第一種觀點的人數). The reasons are as follows. First,
(第一種理由). Besides,
On the contrary, others say
(他們的觀點). They think
(第一種理由). What' s more,
(第二種理由).
As far as I'm concerned, we should
(自己的觀點). Only in this way
.(美好前景預測).
●柱形或餅形圖表式
柱形或餅形圖表式作文的體裁多為議論文、說明文和應用文,內容大多涉及前后變化對比、正反觀點對比或產品介紹等臼要求考生通過數據、文字內容分析,系統準確地表達出變化的含義,并得出令人信服的結論。
柱形或餅形圖表式作文寫作形式和要求與文字表格式有所區別。寫圖表作文時,要注意遵循以下步驟:
(1)認真分析圖表的含義,弄清圖表中所含的信息及不同信息間的關系:柱形圖用來表示各種中事物的變化情況及相互關系,要求考生通過寬度相等的柱形的高度或長度差別來判斷事物的動態發展趨勢,因此考生應密切關注坐標線上的刻度單位及圖表旁邊的提示說明與文字。餅形圖表示各事物在總體中所占的比例及相互關系,旨在要求考生準確理解并闡述一個被分割成大小不等切片的餅形圖所傳達的信息。考生應清楚掌握部分與整體,部分與部分之間的相互關系,這種中關系通常是以百分比的數字形式給出的。
(2)確定文童的主題思想,構思出文章的基本框架,篩選出能說明圖表主題思想的典型數據;
(3)編列文章的提綱;
(4)根據文章的提綱,將各段的提綱內容擴展成段落,然后將各個段落組成文章,注意段與段之間的銜接與過渡。
實際寫作時,常采用三段式的謀篇方式。
第一段:概述圖表反映的主題思想;
第二段:分析產生的原因;
第三段:展望未來或提出辦法或建議。
寫作模板
Recently, a survey has been done to find out
(所要表達的主題). As is shown in the pie chart,
(表中的內容),
(表中的內容).
(表中的內容3 ) and
(表中的內容).
In conclusion, the survey shows that
(總體規律),
(趨勢或呈現的問題). Many factors contribute to the problem One is that
(原因之一).Another is that
(原因之一).
In my opinion, _
(自己的觀點,如何解決問題).
寫作模板
As is shown / indicated / illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table (graph/pie chart),
(作文題目的議題) has been on rise (goes up/increases/drops/decreases).
(具具變化數據). Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that
(得出結論).
There are
( 至少兩個) reasons why this happened. On the one hand,
(原因之一). On the other hand,
(原因之二). In addition,
.(原因之三) is also responsible for it.
It is high time that we
.(發出倡議). We would
(解決問題的方法或對策)
本文采用三段成文法。第一段引出話題:第二段寫贊成和反對的看法:第三段發表自己的看法。
Recently our class have had a heated discussion about whether we celebrate foreign festivals, especially those western festivals.
Some students are in favor of the idea. They think that as the society develops, the connection between the countries is frequent. Celebrating foreign festivals helps understand the foreign cultures. What's more, it helps better communicate with foreign friends and enhance the understanding and friendship. For some young people, they consider it as a fashion act to celebrate foreign festivals. However, others are against it. They think that we should keep our own national characteristics and celebrate our festivals such as the Spring Festival. Some young people celebrate more and more foreign festivals and consider celebrating China's festivals as outdated. The opposite side think, as Chinese, we should try our best to spread our Chinese culture, making more foreigners celebrate Chinese festivals.
In my opinion, we should work hard to make our country stronger and the world will learn much more about our culture and our festivals, just as our language becomes more and more popular in other countries.
(1)經典句子:
1. For some young people, they consider it as a fashion act to celebrate foreign festivals.
2. As a Chinese, we should try our best to spread our Chinese culture, malting more foreigners celebrate Chinese festivals.
3. In my opinion, we should work hard to make our country stronger and the world will learn much more about our culture and our festivals, just as our language becomes more and more popular in other countries.
(2)推薦素材
春節是我們最重要的節日,如同西方的圣誕節。請根據以下要點,以The spring Festival 為題,寫一篇120字左右的短文。
1、春節的時間:一般是在一月底或二月初,從除夕至正月十五,持續十五天;
2、春節期間的傳統活動;放鞭炮、煙花;看春晚;走親訪友;
3、你的建議:如何過春節更有意義,談談自己的看法。
The Spring Festival
Far and away the most important holiday in China is the Spring Festival, also known as the Chinese New Year. To Chinese people it is as important as Christmas to Westerners.
The dates for this annual celebration vary from late January to early February. To the ordinary Chinese, the festival actually begins on the eve of the lunar New Year's Day and ends on the 15th of the first month, which is normally called the Lantern Festival.
Before the Spring Festival, people usually dean and decorate their houses.
All family members get together on New Year's Eve to have a big meal, followed by the lucky money given to the children to wish for good luck in the newyear People toll also light crackers and fireworks and watch the Spring Festival Gala together. During the festival, we always visit our relatives from do or to do or.
(3)常用詞匯
celebrate (v.) 慶祝
celebration n. 慶祝
custom 風
origin 起源
performance 表演
festival 節日
nowadays 現在
particular 特定的
treat 款待
wedding 婚禮
merry 高興的
occasion 場合
lantern 燈籠
reception 接待
invitation 邀請
congratulate (v.) 道賀
congratulation (n.) 祝賀
ceremony 典禮,儀式
fireworks 煙花
harvest 收獲
recreation 娛樂
religion 宗
celebrate an anniversary 慶祝周年紀念
an event of importance 具有重要意義的事件
attend a ceremony 出席一個儀式
a display of fireworks 煙火表演
on special occasions 在特殊合
get-together 聚會
in memory of 紀念……
訓練(26)及參考范文
高考英語寫作,即根據提示進行書面表達,有效的組織自己的思想,自己的邏輯,正確地運用語文載體,連貫地傳遞信息,表達意思,有效運用所學語言知識。高考英語書面表達是英語考試的重頭戲之一,而且非常適合考前集中突破。高考英語作文題目的命題歷來是“情理之中,意料之外”。“情理之中”即高考英語寫作皆是“學生話題、現實生活、熱點焦點話題”;“意料之外”則指高考英語作文題目經常與考生直接關心的社會熱點話題無直接聯系,但仔細琢磨,又會發現一些聯系,就是說“熱點歸熱點,關鍵找角度”。注意:1)要把原文的內容表達的清楚,順暢2) 字數一定要達到要求3)符合出題者的要求4)復合句、高級詞匯的使用。
要求考生必須把以下范文背誦并默寫過,高考時則可根據實際進行套用,大腦提取信息,信手拈來高分!
二、話題:節假日活動(Festivals,Holidays and Celebrations)
【預測試題5】慶祝節日——【圖表類】【議論文】
近年來,國內很多年輕人熱衷過“圣誕節”、“情人節”等外國節日。就這個問題,最近我們班進行了一場熱烈的討論口一些人贊成,一些人反對。
贊成的同學認為 反對的同學認為
1、隨著社會的發展,世界各國之間的聯系日益增多,文化之間的傳播也越來越多。過外國節日,有利于理解外國文化。
2、過外國節日有利于與外國朋友交流,增加相互了解和友誼。
3、過外國節日是一種時尚,是另一種娛樂的方式。 1、我們應該保持民族特色,過好我們自己的節日。如:春節。
2、有些年輕人熱衷于過外國節日,卻忘記自己的節日。
3、我們應該致力于傳播中國文化,讓更多的外國人過中國節日。
圖表寫作是高考常用的形式之一,“過外國節日的話題”淺顯易懂,其切入點與高中生的生活實際貼近,而且具有一定的開放性,使得每個學生都能夠有話可說口符合高考的命題方向。
圖表作文是近幾年高考常選的命題方式之一。在高考中常以兩種方式對學生進行考查,一種是文字表格式,另一種是柱形或餅形圖式。
●文字表格式
文字表格式作文的體裁相對穩定,以說明文、議論文為主,輔之以記敘文。題材豐富多樣,有書信、發言稿、產品介紹等,通常情況下,試題明確規定了所使用的寫作格式。因此,考生只需根據表格里的提示內容,確定所要表達的寫作要點,運用自己所掌握的句型和詞匯知識,做到要點齊全、語句通順、條理清楚、表達明確、思路靈活、書寫工整。
寫作模板
1、利弊型
Recently, our class have had a heated discussion on whether
(作文主題). Opinions vary from person to person/Opinions are divided among students.
Some people think it necessary to
(正方觀點). For one thing,
.(理由一). For another,
.(理由二).
On the other hand, others hold the opposite opinion. From their point of view,
(反方理由一). What's more,
(反方理由二).
In my opinion, I support/oppose the idea that
(作文主題).
(你的理由).
2. 觀點對比型
Recently, a survey has been carried out in our school on whether
(作文主題).
As can be seen from the result of the survey, opinions are divided. About
(持有第一種觀點的人數). The reasons are as follows. First,
(第一種理由). Besides,
On the contrary, others say
(他們的觀點). They think
(第一種理由). What' s more,
(第二種理由).
As far as I'm concerned, we should
(自己的觀點). Only in this way
.(美好前景預測).
●柱形或餅形圖表式
柱形或餅形圖表式作文的體裁多為議論文、說明文和應用文,內容大多涉及前后變化對比、正反觀點對比或產品介紹等臼要求考生通過數據、文字內容分析,系統準確地表達出變化的含義,并得出令人信服的結論。
柱形或餅形圖表式作文寫作形式和要求與文字表格式有所區別。寫圖表作文時,要注意遵循以下步驟:
(1)認真分析圖表的含義,弄清圖表中所含的信息及不同信息間的關系:柱形圖用來表示各種中事物的變化情況及相互關系,要求考生通過寬度相等的柱形的高度或長度差別來判斷事物的動態發展趨勢,因此考生應密切關注坐標線上的刻度單位及圖表旁邊的提示說明與文字。餅形圖表示各事物在總體中所占的比例及相互關系,旨在要求考生準確理解并闡述一個被分割成大小不等切片的餅形圖所傳達的信息。考生應清楚掌握部分與整體,部分與部分之間的相互關系,這種中關系通常是以百分比的數字形式給出的。
(2)確定文童的主題思想,構思出文章的基本框架,篩選出能說明圖表主題思想的典型數據;
(3)編列文章的提綱;
(4)根據文章的提綱,將各段的提綱內容擴展成段落,然后將各個段落組成文章,注意段與段之間的銜接與過渡。
實際寫作時,常采用三段式的謀篇方式。
第一段:概述圖表反映的主題思想;
第二段:分析產生的原因;
第三段:展望未來或提出辦法或建議。
寫作模板
Recently, a survey has been done to find out
(所要表達的主題). As is shown in the pie chart,
(表中的內容),
(表中的內容).
(表中的內容3 ) and
(表中的內容).
In conclusion, the survey shows that
(總體規律),
(趨勢或呈現的問題). Many factors contribute to the problem One is that
(原因之一).Another is that
(原因之一).
In my opinion, _
(自己的觀點,如何解決問題).
寫作模板
As is shown / indicated / illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table (graph/pie chart),
(作文題目的議題) has been on rise (goes up/increases/drops/decreases).
(具具變化數據). Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that
(得出結論).
There are
( 至少兩個) reasons why this happened. On the one hand,
(原因之一). On the other hand,
(原因之二). In addition,
.(原因之三) is also responsible for it.
It is high time that we
.(發出倡議). We would
(解決問題的方法或對策)
本文采用三段成文法。第一段引出話題:第二段寫贊成和反對的看法:第三段發表自己的看法。
Recently our class have had a heated discussion about whether we celebrate foreign festivals, especially those western festivals.
Some students are in favor of the idea. They think that as the society develops, the connection between the countries is frequent. Celebrating foreign festivals helps understand the foreign cultures. What's more, it helps better communicate with foreign friends and enhance the understanding and friendship. For some young people, they consider it as a fashion act to celebrate foreign festivals. However, others are against it. They think that we should keep our own national characteristics and celebrate our festivals such as the Spring Festival. Some young people celebrate more and more foreign festivals and consider celebrating China's festivals as outdated. The opposite side think, as Chinese, we should try our best to spread our Chinese culture, making more foreigners celebrate Chinese festivals.
In my opinion, we should work hard to make our country stronger and the world will learn much more about our culture and our festivals, just as our language becomes more and more popular in other countries.
(1)經典句子:
1. For some young people, they consider it as a fashion act to celebrate foreign festivals.
2. As a Chinese, we should try our best to spread our Chinese culture, malting more foreigners celebrate Chinese festivals.
3. In my opinion, we should work hard to make our country stronger and the world will learn much more about our culture and our festivals, just as our language becomes more and more popular in other countries.
(2)推薦素材
春節是我們最重要的節日,如同西方的圣誕節。請根據以下要點,以The spring Festival 為題,寫一篇120字左右的短文。
1、春節的時間:一般是在一月底或二月初,從除夕至正月十五,持續十五天;
2、春節期間的傳統活動;放鞭炮、煙花;看春晚;走親訪友;
3、你的建議:如何過春節更有意義,談談自己的看法。
The Spring Festival
Far and away the most important holiday in China is the Spring Festival, also known as the Chinese New Year. To Chinese people it is as important as Christmas to Westerners.
The dates for this annual celebration vary from late January to early February. To the ordinary Chinese, the festival actually begins on the eve of the lunar New Year's Day and ends on the 15th of the first month, which is normally called the Lantern Festival.
Before the Spring Festival, people usually dean and decorate their houses.
All family members get together on New Year's Eve to have a big meal, followed by the lucky money given to the children to wish for good luck in the newyear People toll also light crackers and fireworks and watch the Spring Festival Gala together. During the festival, we always visit our relatives from do or to do or.
(3)常用詞匯
celebrate (v.) 慶祝
celebration n. 慶祝
custom 風
origin 起源
performance 表演
festival 節日
nowadays 現在
particular 特定的
treat 款待
wedding 婚禮
merry 高興的
occasion 場合
lantern 燈籠
reception 接待
invitation 邀請
congratulate (v.) 道賀
congratulation (n.) 祝賀
ceremony 典禮,儀式
fireworks 煙花
harvest 收獲
recreation 娛樂
religion 宗
celebrate an anniversary 慶祝周年紀念
an event of importance 具有重要意義的事件
attend a ceremony 出席一個儀式
a display of fireworks 煙火表演
on special occasions 在特殊合
get-together 聚會
in memory of 紀念……