高考英語二輪專題復習提升精選：短文改錯

　　1.短文改錯

　　此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤.對標題號的每一行做出判斷：如無錯誤，在該行右邊的橫線上劃（√）；如有錯誤（每行只有一個錯誤），則按下列情況改正：

　　此行多一個詞：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。

　　此行缺一個詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。

　　此行錯一個詞：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。

　　注意：原行沒有錯的不要改。

　　One day I happened to find a chatting room on

　　76．

　　my QQ, there people were chatting in English. I tried

　　77．

　　to chat with some of them . To my surprised, I found

　　78．

　　the oral English of some junior students were better

　　79．

　　than me . I asked them for advice and they told me

　　80．

　　to practise more on QQ. But every day after that I

　　81．

　　would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ. 82．

　　Day by day I learned from many useful words and

　　83．

　　expressions . With time went by , I found that I could

　　84．

　　even communicate some college students freely . 85．

　　2.

　　下文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加: 在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除: 把多余的詞用斜線〔〕劃掉。

　　修改: 在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

　　Most students feel like nervous before taking an important exam. Some feel dizzy or tiring, some lose their appetites for food and other even suffer from sleep problems. All the symptoms have terrible effects in their exams. How can they get rid of these bad symptoms? Personal, it’s important to make a careful plan in advance to review what they have learned, what will help them reduce the pressure. Besides, they should arrange their time properly. They shouldn’t stay too late because only enough sleep makes them energetic and enable them to perform well in an exam. What’s more, a balanced diet can contribute to their perform in exams. They are supposed to eating nutritious food such as eggs, milk, meat, carrots, walnuts, etc.

　　3.短文改錯

　　I was real sad when I found my bicycle went wrong again. Tired of repairing it again and again,

　　I decided buy a new one. After school, I went to a shop locating in the center of the city with a

　　friend called Jack. The black bicycle attracted my eyes as soon as we went into the store. It looked

　　so cool that I could hardly wait to ride it. The shopkeepers told us that it was the latest bicycle.

　　He wanted to charge me for 800 yuan, that was too high for me. I just couldn’ t afford such

　　an expensive one. Then I choose another one, which cost him only 200 yuan. It was not perfect,

　　so it was much better than the old one.

　　4.假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作 文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的 增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（A )，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線〔〕劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

　　Last Saturday, our school had organized all of the Senior 1 students to visit

　　the children at a local orphanage. We took many books that was popular among

　　children, as well as many kinds of school supplies and toys, to children.

　　They were delighted to receive these gift. We played some games together and give

　　performances. Before leave the orphanage we took photos with them and gave

　　them our contact details but we could keep in touch with one another.

　　That day, each one of us had an enjoyable time. We gave the children their

　　care and help; for return ，they gave us their smiles and love. These voluntary

　　activities made a deeply impression on us.

　　5.下面短文中有10處語言錯誤，請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧），并在其下面寫上該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。

　　注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

　　Boys and girls,

　　May I have your attention, please? I have anything important to tell you. Next Sunday afternoon, class was going to hold an English story-telling competition in lecture hall. Everybody is required to take part in the activity. Two foreign teacher will be invited to act as judges. The activity will benefit from you in many ways. For example, it will give us a good chance to practicing your oral English and train your communication skills. However, it will inspire your interest at English. The requirements are as follows. First, the story can be original. That is, the story must be made up by yourself. Second, the story must be presented in English. Finally, your story should be finished within three minutes. That’s all, thank you.

　　6.短文改錯

　　Li Hua,

　　I feel great honored to be trusted with your personal affairs. Here is some advices for you:

　　First of all, you should talk to your parents or let them know where your interest is. If they know what you really want to do in the future, they are possible to change their mind. Secondly, don't worry too many about them because too much anxiety may affect your studies. Besides, you can talk to your teachers and your best friends such that they can help you to persuade your parents.

　　Personally, what you want to major in and what profession you would like to enter in depend on your own interest because they were part of your life. I hope you can follow my own interest and realize your dream in end.

　　Yours,

　　Wang Lei

　　試卷答案

　　1.76．√

　　77. there→where

　　78. surprised→surprise

　　79. were→was 80. me→mine 81. But→So/And

　　82. practise—practising

　　83. 刪除from”

　　84. As→With or went→going

　　85. communicatewith

　　2.

　　Most students feel like nervous before taking an important exam. Some feel

　　刪除

　　dizzy or tiring, some lose their appetites for food and other even suffer from sleep

　　tired

　　others

　　problems. All the symptoms have terrible effects in their exams. How can they

　　on

　　get rid of these bad symptoms? Personal, it’s important to make a careful plan

　　Personally

　　in advance to review what they have learned, what will help them reduce the

　　which

　　pressure. Besides, they should arrange their time properly. They shouldn’t stay∧

　　up

　　too late because only enough sleep makes them energetic and enable them to

　　enables

　　perform well in an exam. What’s more, a balanced diet can contribute to their

　　perform in exams. They are supposed to eating nutritious food such as eggs,

　　performance

　　eat

　　milk, meat, carrots, walnuts, etc.

　　3.

　　I was real sad when I found my bicycle went wrong again. Tired of repairing it again and again,

　　really

　　I decided ∧ buy a new one. After school, I went to a shop locating in the center of the city with a

　　to

　　located

　　friend called Jack. The black bicycle attracted my eyes as soon as we went into the store. It looked

　　A

　　so cool that I could hardly wait to ride it. The shopkeepers told us that it was the latest bicycle.

　　shopkeeper

　　He wanted to charge me for 800 yuan, that was too high for me. I just couldn’ t afford such

　　which

　　an expensive one. Then I choose another one, which cost him only 200 yuan. It was not perfect,

　　chose

　　me

　　so it was much better than the old one.

　　but

　　4.

　　Last Saturday, our school had organized all of the Senior 1 students to visit

　　the children at a local orphanage. We took many books that was popular among

　　were

　　children, as well as many kinds of school supplies and toys, to ∧ children. They

　　the

　　were delighted to receive these gift. We played some games together and gave

　　gifts

　　give

　　performances. Before leave the orphanage we took photos with them and gave

　　leaving

　　them our contact details but we could keep in touch with one another.

　　so

　　That day, each one of us had an enjoyable time. We gave the children their

　　our

　　care and help; for return, they gave us their smiles and love. These voluntary

　　in

　　activities made a deeply impression on us.

　　deep

　　5.

　　Boys and girls,

　　May I have your attention, please? I have anything important to tell you. Next Sunday

　　something

　　afternoon, our class was going to hold an English story-telling competition in∧ lecture hall.

　　is

　　the

　　Everybody is required to take part in the activity. Two foreign teacher will be invited to act as

　　teachers

　　judges. The activity will benefit from you in many ways. For example, it will give us a good

　　you

　　chance to practicing your oral English and train your communication skills. However, it will

　　practice

　　Besides

　　inspire your interest at English. The requirements are as follows. First, the story can be original.

　　in

　　must

　　That is, the story must be made up by yourself. Second, the story must be presented in English.

　　Third, the story should be interesting. Finally, your story should be finished within three minutes.

　　That’s all. Thank you.

　　6.1. great —> greatly;

　　2. advices —> advice;

　　3. or —> and;

　　4. possible —> likely;

　　5.many —> much

　　6. such —> so;

　　7. in去掉; 8. were —> are;

　　9. my —> your;

　　10. in the end

　　高考英語二輪專題復習提升精選：短文改錯

　　1.短文改錯

　　此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤.對標題號的每一行做出判斷：如無錯誤，在該行右邊的橫線上劃（√）；如有錯誤（每行只有一個錯誤），則按下列情況改正：

　　此行多一個詞：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。

　　此行缺一個詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。

　　此行錯一個詞：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。

　　注意：原行沒有錯的不要改。

　　One day I happened to find a chatting room on

　　76．

　　my QQ, there people were chatting in English. I tried

　　77．

　　to chat with some of them . To my surprised, I found

　　78．

　　the oral English of some junior students were better

　　79．

　　than me . I asked them for advice and they told me

　　80．

　　to practise more on QQ. But every day after that I

　　81．

　　would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ. 82．

　　Day by day I learned from many useful words and

　　83．

　　expressions . With time went by , I found that I could

　　84．

　　even communicate some college students freely . 85．

　　2.

　　下文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加: 在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除: 把多余的詞用斜線〔〕劃掉。

　　修改: 在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

　　Most students feel like nervous before taking an important exam. Some feel dizzy or tiring, some lose their appetites for food and other even suffer from sleep problems. All the symptoms have terrible effects in their exams. How can they get rid of these bad symptoms? Personal, it’s important to make a careful plan in advance to review what they have learned, what will help them reduce the pressure. Besides, they should arrange their time properly. They shouldn’t stay too late because only enough sleep makes them energetic and enable them to perform well in an exam. What’s more, a balanced diet can contribute to their perform in exams. They are supposed to eating nutritious food such as eggs, milk, meat, carrots, walnuts, etc.

　　3.短文改錯

　　I was real sad when I found my bicycle went wrong again. Tired of repairing it again and again,

　　I decided buy a new one. After school, I went to a shop locating in the center of the city with a

　　friend called Jack. The black bicycle attracted my eyes as soon as we went into the store. It looked

　　so cool that I could hardly wait to ride it. The shopkeepers told us that it was the latest bicycle.

　　He wanted to charge me for 800 yuan, that was too high for me. I just couldn’ t afford such

　　an expensive one. Then I choose another one, which cost him only 200 yuan. It was not perfect,

　　so it was much better than the old one.

　　4.假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作 文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的 增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（A )，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線〔〕劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

　　Last Saturday, our school had organized all of the Senior 1 students to visit

　　the children at a local orphanage. We took many books that was popular among

　　children, as well as many kinds of school supplies and toys, to children.

　　They were delighted to receive these gift. We played some games together and give

　　performances. Before leave the orphanage we took photos with them and gave

　　them our contact details but we could keep in touch with one another.

　　That day, each one of us had an enjoyable time. We gave the children their

　　care and help; for return ，they gave us their smiles and love. These voluntary

　　activities made a deeply impression on us.

　　5.下面短文中有10處語言錯誤，請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧），并在其下面寫上該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。

　　注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

　　Boys and girls,

　　May I have your attention, please? I have anything important to tell you. Next Sunday afternoon, class was going to hold an English story-telling competition in lecture hall. Everybody is required to take part in the activity. Two foreign teacher will be invited to act as judges. The activity will benefit from you in many ways. For example, it will give us a good chance to practicing your oral English and train your communication skills. However, it will inspire your interest at English. The requirements are as follows. First, the story can be original. That is, the story must be made up by yourself. Second, the story must be presented in English. Finally, your story should be finished within three minutes. That’s all, thank you.

　　6.短文改錯

　　Li Hua,

　　I feel great honored to be trusted with your personal affairs. Here is some advices for you:

　　First of all, you should talk to your parents or let them know where your interest is. If they know what you really want to do in the future, they are possible to change their mind. Secondly, don't worry too many about them because too much anxiety may affect your studies. Besides, you can talk to your teachers and your best friends such that they can help you to persuade your parents.

　　Personally, what you want to major in and what profession you would like to enter in depend on your own interest because they were part of your life. I hope you can follow my own interest and realize your dream in end.

　　Yours,

　　Wang Lei

　　試卷答案

　　1.76．√

　　77. there→where

　　78. surprised→surprise

　　79. were→was 80. me→mine 81. But→So/And

　　82. practise—practising

　　83. 刪除from”

　　84. As→With or went→going

　　85. communicatewith

　　2.

　　Most students feel like nervous before taking an important exam. Some feel

　　刪除

　　dizzy or tiring, some lose their appetites for food and other even suffer from sleep

　　tired

　　others

　　problems. All the symptoms have terrible effects in their exams. How can they

　　on

　　get rid of these bad symptoms? Personal, it’s important to make a careful plan

　　Personally

　　in advance to review what they have learned, what will help them reduce the

　　which

　　pressure. Besides, they should arrange their time properly. They shouldn’t stay∧

　　up

　　too late because only enough sleep makes them energetic and enable them to

　　enables

　　perform well in an exam. What’s more, a balanced diet can contribute to their

　　perform in exams. They are supposed to eating nutritious food such as eggs,

　　performance

　　eat

　　milk, meat, carrots, walnuts, etc.

　　3.

　　I was real sad when I found my bicycle went wrong again. Tired of repairing it again and again,

　　really

　　I decided ∧ buy a new one. After school, I went to a shop locating in the center of the city with a

　　to

　　located

　　friend called Jack. The black bicycle attracted my eyes as soon as we went into the store. It looked

　　A

　　so cool that I could hardly wait to ride it. The shopkeepers told us that it was the latest bicycle.

　　shopkeeper

　　He wanted to charge me for 800 yuan, that was too high for me. I just couldn’ t afford such

　　which

　　an expensive one. Then I choose another one, which cost him only 200 yuan. It was not perfect,

　　chose

　　me

　　so it was much better than the old one.

　　but

　　4.

　　Last Saturday, our school had organized all of the Senior 1 students to visit

　　the children at a local orphanage. We took many books that was popular among

　　were

　　children, as well as many kinds of school supplies and toys, to ∧ children. They

　　the

　　were delighted to receive these gift. We played some games together and gave

　　gifts

　　give

　　performances. Before leave the orphanage we took photos with them and gave

　　leaving

　　them our contact details but we could keep in touch with one another.

　　so

　　That day, each one of us had an enjoyable time. We gave the children their

　　our

　　care and help; for return, they gave us their smiles and love. These voluntary

　　in

　　activities made a deeply impression on us.

　　deep

　　5.

　　Boys and girls,

　　May I have your attention, please? I have anything important to tell you. Next Sunday

　　something

　　afternoon, our class was going to hold an English story-telling competition in∧ lecture hall.

　　is

　　the

　　Everybody is required to take part in the activity. Two foreign teacher will be invited to act as

　　teachers

　　judges. The activity will benefit from you in many ways. For example, it will give us a good

　　you

　　chance to practicing your oral English and train your communication skills. However, it will

　　practice

　　Besides

　　inspire your interest at English. The requirements are as follows. First, the story can be original.

　　in

　　must

　　That is, the story must be made up by yourself. Second, the story must be presented in English.

　　Third, the story should be interesting. Finally, your story should be finished within three minutes.

　　That’s all. Thank you.

　　6.1. great —> greatly;

　　2. advices —> advice;

　　3. or —> and;

　　4. possible —> likely;

　　5.many —> much

　　6. such —> so;

　　7. in去掉; 8. were —> are;

　　9. my —> your;

　　10. in the end