高考英語二輪專題訓練 書面表達20

　　廣東省中山市2024屆高三高考模擬題英語試題

　　【題文】

　　A boy quarreled with his parents and ran away from home. He had a hard life

　　16

　　any contact with his family for years. Later he wanted to go home

　　17

　　he was afraid that his parents might not welcome him.

　　Finally he decided to send a letter to his father

　　18

　　(express) his desire to return home and begging his pardon. In his letter he asked his father to tie a white ribbon on

　　19

　　tree near his house by the side of the railway lines if he was ready to welcome him back home.

　　20

　　he did not see the ribbon on the tree, he would think that his family did not welcome him and then he would leave them forever.

　　He boarded the train and waited very

　　21

　　(nervous) as the train was about to pass by his home. To his surprise, the tree

　　22

　　(decorate) with hundreds of white ribbons

　　23

　　danced in the wind. His family did not want him to miss the sight of the ribbon and the welcome signal, so

　　24

　　covered the whole tree with ribbons to show their whole-hearted

　　25

　　(happy) and willingness to welcome him back.

　　【答案】16. without

　　17. but

　　18. expressing

　　19. the

　　20. If

　　21. nervously

　　22. was decorated

　　23. which/ that

　　24. they

　　25. happiness

　　廣東省惠州市2024屆高三第二次調研考試英語試題

　　【題文】隨著智能手機的廣泛應用，越來越多的年輕人成為低頭族。近日，重慶劃設了中國第一條專供手機使用者的人行道。請根據以下內容寫一篇報道。

　　【寫作內容】

　　地點 重慶洋人街景區

　　基本情況 3米寬，50米長

　　人行道一分為二；一邊劃設給手機使用者，另一邊則為非手機使用者使用

　　目的 保障手機使用者的行走安全

　　看法 一些人贊同：認為人行道的設置是合理的，可避免手機使用者在行走中造成不必要的傷害

　　一些人反對：認為最好的辦法是加強行人的安全教育，改掉手機使用者沉迷手機的不良習慣。

　　參考詞匯：人行道：sidewalk；

　　洋人街景區：Yangrenjie Scenic Spot

　　【寫作要求】

　　1. 只能用5個句子表達全部內容；

　　2. 首句已給出，不計入總句數。

　　【評分標準】

　　句子結構準確，信息內容完整，篇章結構連貫。

　　With the increasing popularity of smart phones, more and more young people in China are glued to them.___________________________________________________________________________

　　【答案】

　　With the increasing popularity of smart phones, more and more young people in China are glued to them. To ensure the safety of phone users on the road, the first “mobile phone sidewalk in China” was built in Yangrenjie Scenic Spot, Chongqing. It is divided into two pathways, one for cell phone users and the other for those ordinary pedestrians. As for its appearance, different people hold different opinions. Some people think it reasonable, viewing it as a good solution to the unnecessary injuries when they use phones while walking. However, others consider it pointless, believing it would be better if phone users can get rid of the bad habits of getting addicted to using phones and enforce the safety education for pedestrians.

　　【解析】

　　【思路點撥】本文是議論文，主要討論是否應該為手機族設專線的問題，學生很容易把握要點，也容易寫出自己的感想和評價。

　　該生具有很好的語言表達能力，語法結構、語態的掌握及高級詞匯的運用基本正確。通篇十分流暢，可以看出作者厚實的寫作功底。第一句就用to ensure不定式結構作狀語抓住了改卷老師的眼球。后面銜接的也十分恰當，使用了as for，while，however等連接結構。文中使用了get rid of，get addicted to doing等高級詞匯。本文語言流暢，高級結構應用自如，抓住了要點，是一篇佳作。

　　書面表達 （滿分25分）

　　假如你是李華，你表哥Robert在美國留學，給你發來信息，說他新開通了微博(microblog)并邀請你加入。請給他回復一封電子郵件，說你同意加入并要求他在微博上為你提供以下內容：

　　1．定期介紹美國的風土人情；

　　2．多介紹一下他在美國的留學情況，因為你也有留學的打算；

　　3．多上傳一些好的照片或視頻。

　　注意：1．詞數120左右；開頭結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。

　　2．必須包含全部內容要點；文中不得出現真實的人名、校名及地名等。

　　3. 可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

　　Dear Robert,

　　I’m glad to receive your massage. Thank you very much for inviting me to join in your microblog._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　I am looking forward to your latest information in your microblog.

　　Yours

　　Lihua

　　【答案】

　　2024年高考真題——英語（湖北卷）

　　【題文】請根據以下提示，并結合具體事例，用英語寫一篇短文。Small things make a big difference. The small things we do can make us a responsible member of the society.

　　注意：無須寫標題；

　　除詩歌外，文體不限；內容必須結合你生活中的具體事例； 文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱；詞數不少于120，如引用提示語則不計入總詞數。One Possible Version

　　It isn’t hard to grow up into a responsible member of society.

　　I can well remember an incident that happened on a rainy Sunday afternoon. I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car, which drove off quickly. A man immediately rushed to the girl to give her first aid and I joined in without hesitation. Luckily she was not badly injured and we sent her to the nearest hospital. Compared with the escaped driver, I am proud of what I did.

　　As a member of the society, I am aware that being responsible is what it takes to make a better society.

　　2024高考真題英語（重慶卷）

　　【題文】青少年研究專家Susan Beacham在自己的英文網站上開辟專欄,邀請大家分享心目中的“最 好禮物”。她認為,禮物貴在心意，應為之付出時間和精力。

　　假設你是李華，請用英文發帖,內容應包括：

　　贊同Susan的看法

　　你收到或送出的最好禮物是什么

　　該禮物的意義

　　期待大家回復

　　注意:（1)詞數不少于80;

　　（2）符合語言規范；

　　（3）在答題卡上作答；

　　（4）開頭已給出（不計入總詞數)。

　　I am a

　　high school student from China.___________________________

　　【答案】

　　【考點】考察半開放性作文

　　【寫作指導】

　　本文要求你以李華的口吻描述你對于Susan持有的“禮物貴在心意，應為之付出時間和經歷”觀點的態度。屬于議論文寫作，所以使用一般現在時和第一人稱。

　　要點：1.贊成Susan的看法。2.舉例說明你收到的最好的禮物（朋友之間用心做的一張生日卡片）等；3.該禮物說明朋友對我的感情是真摯的，生雖然禮物不貴重，但是情義很重。4.期待大家的回復。

　　【一句多譯】

　　一天，當我打開書本的時候，我發現了附在第一頁上一張漂亮的卡片，給了我最好的祝福。

　　I opened my book, I found a beautiful card attached to the first page, giving me best wishes.

　　One day, when I opened my book, I found a beautiful card attached to the first page, which gave me best wishes.

　　【參考范文】

　　高考英語二輪專題訓練 書面表達20

　　廣東省中山市2024屆高三高考模擬題英語試題

　　【題文】

　　A boy quarreled with his parents and ran away from home. He had a hard life

　　16

　　any contact with his family for years. Later he wanted to go home

　　17

　　he was afraid that his parents might not welcome him.

　　Finally he decided to send a letter to his father

　　18

　　(express) his desire to return home and begging his pardon. In his letter he asked his father to tie a white ribbon on

　　19

　　tree near his house by the side of the railway lines if he was ready to welcome him back home.

　　20

　　he did not see the ribbon on the tree, he would think that his family did not welcome him and then he would leave them forever.

　　He boarded the train and waited very

　　21

　　(nervous) as the train was about to pass by his home. To his surprise, the tree

　　22

　　(decorate) with hundreds of white ribbons

　　23

　　danced in the wind. His family did not want him to miss the sight of the ribbon and the welcome signal, so

　　24

　　covered the whole tree with ribbons to show their whole-hearted

　　25

　　(happy) and willingness to welcome him back.

　　【答案】16. without

　　17. but

　　18. expressing

　　19. the

　　20. If

　　21. nervously

　　22. was decorated

　　23. which/ that

　　24. they

　　25. happiness

　　廣東省惠州市2024屆高三第二次調研考試英語試題

　　【題文】隨著智能手機的廣泛應用，越來越多的年輕人成為低頭族。近日，重慶劃設了中國第一條專供手機使用者的人行道。請根據以下內容寫一篇報道。

　　【寫作內容】

　　地點 重慶洋人街景區

　　基本情況 3米寬，50米長

　　人行道一分為二；一邊劃設給手機使用者，另一邊則為非手機使用者使用

　　目的 保障手機使用者的行走安全

　　看法 一些人贊同：認為人行道的設置是合理的，可避免手機使用者在行走中造成不必要的傷害

　　一些人反對：認為最好的辦法是加強行人的安全教育，改掉手機使用者沉迷手機的不良習慣。

　　參考詞匯：人行道：sidewalk；

　　洋人街景區：Yangrenjie Scenic Spot

　　【寫作要求】

　　1. 只能用5個句子表達全部內容；

　　2. 首句已給出，不計入總句數。

　　【評分標準】

　　句子結構準確，信息內容完整，篇章結構連貫。

　　With the increasing popularity of smart phones, more and more young people in China are glued to them.___________________________________________________________________________

　　【答案】

　　With the increasing popularity of smart phones, more and more young people in China are glued to them. To ensure the safety of phone users on the road, the first “mobile phone sidewalk in China” was built in Yangrenjie Scenic Spot, Chongqing. It is divided into two pathways, one for cell phone users and the other for those ordinary pedestrians. As for its appearance, different people hold different opinions. Some people think it reasonable, viewing it as a good solution to the unnecessary injuries when they use phones while walking. However, others consider it pointless, believing it would be better if phone users can get rid of the bad habits of getting addicted to using phones and enforce the safety education for pedestrians.

　　【解析】

　　【思路點撥】本文是議論文，主要討論是否應該為手機族設專線的問題，學生很容易把握要點，也容易寫出自己的感想和評價。

　　該生具有很好的語言表達能力，語法結構、語態的掌握及高級詞匯的運用基本正確。通篇十分流暢，可以看出作者厚實的寫作功底。第一句就用to ensure不定式結構作狀語抓住了改卷老師的眼球。后面銜接的也十分恰當，使用了as for，while，however等連接結構。文中使用了get rid of，get addicted to doing等高級詞匯。本文語言流暢，高級結構應用自如，抓住了要點，是一篇佳作。

　　書面表達 （滿分25分）

　　假如你是李華，你表哥Robert在美國留學，給你發來信息，說他新開通了微博(microblog)并邀請你加入。請給他回復一封電子郵件，說你同意加入并要求他在微博上為你提供以下內容：

　　1．定期介紹美國的風土人情；

　　2．多介紹一下他在美國的留學情況，因為你也有留學的打算；

　　3．多上傳一些好的照片或視頻。

　　注意：1．詞數120左右；開頭結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。

　　2．必須包含全部內容要點；文中不得出現真實的人名、校名及地名等。

　　3. 可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

　　Dear Robert,

　　I’m glad to receive your massage. Thank you very much for inviting me to join in your microblog._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　I am looking forward to your latest information in your microblog.

　　Yours

　　Lihua

　　【答案】

　　2024年高考真題——英語（湖北卷）

　　【題文】請根據以下提示，并結合具體事例，用英語寫一篇短文。Small things make a big difference. The small things we do can make us a responsible member of the society.

　　注意：無須寫標題；

　　除詩歌外，文體不限；內容必須結合你生活中的具體事例； 文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱；詞數不少于120，如引用提示語則不計入總詞數。One Possible Version

　　It isn’t hard to grow up into a responsible member of society.

　　I can well remember an incident that happened on a rainy Sunday afternoon. I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car, which drove off quickly. A man immediately rushed to the girl to give her first aid and I joined in without hesitation. Luckily she was not badly injured and we sent her to the nearest hospital. Compared with the escaped driver, I am proud of what I did.

　　As a member of the society, I am aware that being responsible is what it takes to make a better society.

　　2024高考真題英語（重慶卷）

　　【題文】青少年研究專家Susan Beacham在自己的英文網站上開辟專欄,邀請大家分享心目中的“最 好禮物”。她認為,禮物貴在心意，應為之付出時間和精力。

　　假設你是李華，請用英文發帖,內容應包括：

　　贊同Susan的看法

　　你收到或送出的最好禮物是什么

　　該禮物的意義

　　期待大家回復

　　注意:（1)詞數不少于80;

　　（2）符合語言規范；

　　（3）在答題卡上作答；

　　（4）開頭已給出（不計入總詞數)。

　　I am a

　　high school student from China.___________________________

　　【答案】

　　【考點】考察半開放性作文

　　【寫作指導】

　　本文要求你以李華的口吻描述你對于Susan持有的“禮物貴在心意，應為之付出時間和經歷”觀點的態度。屬于議論文寫作，所以使用一般現在時和第一人稱。

　　要點：1.贊成Susan的看法。2.舉例說明你收到的最好的禮物（朋友之間用心做的一張生日卡片）等；3.該禮物說明朋友對我的感情是真摯的，生雖然禮物不貴重，但是情義很重。4.期待大家的回復。

　　【一句多譯】

　　一天，當我打開書本的時候，我發現了附在第一頁上一張漂亮的卡片，給了我最好的祝福。

　　I opened my book, I found a beautiful card attached to the first page, giving me best wishes.

　　One day, when I opened my book, I found a beautiful card attached to the first page, which gave me best wishes.

　　【參考范文】