2010-2023英語一 歷年大作文

2023戲服 傳統文化/家教 態度哲理

2023學習習慣 個人選擇 態度哲理

2023爬山 堅持/互助 態度哲理

2023選課學習 個人選擇 態度哲理

2023讀書學習 個人選擇 態度哲理

2023家教學習 榜樣作用 態度哲理

2023手機時代的聚會 社會現象

2023相攜 社會現象

2023畢業的選擇 社會現象

2023半瓶水 態度哲理

2011環保 環保

2010文化火鍋 文化交流

以往：環保 文化交流 和社會熱點 近年沒有成為單純靠點

入選過的主題 ：環保 親子關系 文化交流 教育 科技 態度哲理 （以下準備五個模板酌情選用）

近年：以人的態度哲理居多 主題具有發散性（可以選擇主題的主旨不止一個）

一般而言不會緊跟時事熱點，疫情 奧運 一帶一路等不太可能入題

發散的態度哲理類話題可能性是最大的，文化（剛涉及過 重考可能性小）和環保類已不再熱門，可能性相對較小

一 立意 （這里講最求穩的做法）

如果是 社會熱點類/社會問題類

不論是好與不好，一般建議寫好的方向 這比較符合美好生活正能量 或者說主旋律，不太可能會跑題。

例一如下：

立意去寫 環境惡化的弊端 邏輯也沒有問題。

但是不論是環境臟亂，還是環境優美，立意建議寫 保護環境的意義 （就是保護好環境 會如何如何造福我們）更符合正能量主旋律。

例二如下：

同上，建議寫 我們需要養老孝親 弘揚孝親美德

例三如下：

這種態度哲理類，如果出現 不同的選擇/不同的觀點

選擇正能量主旋律，建議也是選取積極的觀點 我們應當樹立積極的態度

? 注意

英語一具有發散性，在保證主題正確的情況下，求穩和求異看個人情況。

例四下圖：

主題寫 文明旅游 也沒問題，但是保護環境 是常見話題，必定沒有問題。

非要寫 文明旅游，論述角度 和 具體內容 則需要思考斟酌

（這意味著 1 可能有寫錯扣分風險 2 臨場思考肯可能會花費更多的答題時間）

例五下圖：

最近幾年仍然發散性主題，上圖 個人選擇 家庭教育 傳統文化 皆是可選方向

個人選擇 入選題目頻率較高 所以建議選此立意最為穩妥（肯定寫 做出合適自己的選擇 做出正確的選擇）

二 模板

終極難題 寫作內容該如何？ 寫作總邏輯：

一段描述圖畫（一句總述 加上一/二句細節描寫 再引入主題）

二段分析（這是閱卷得分的關鍵）

三段總結收尾

基礎好的同學： 學會寫作結構即可 自己隨意發揮

基礎差的同學：背范文（積累素材）v.s. 背模板(一鍵掛機)

大小作文至少背個20篇，背到滾瓜爛熟，穩定可靠一定成功，得分會高一點，但費時。

準備模板去套（這個也需要背）不一定能完全套的上，得分相對低，但速成。

綜合一下，短期突擊又要穩定，建議先模板再積累范文中可用素材（類似于我們小作文的做法）。

先說首段

如果是單圖

As is vividly depicted in the picture, there are/is sb doing sth. With…, sb is doing sth. (追加一句詳述圖畫細節)Below the picture, there is a caption that reads: “______”.

追加細節描述 不是剛需 可以不寫 為了得高分還是建議寫一個

如果是雙圖

Presented in the above two pictures is a common phenomenon現象. In the first picture, sb doing sth, while in the second one, sb doing sth. Below the picture, there is a caption that reads: “______”.

不論單圖雙圖，如果不會直譯caption，可以直接寫文章的主題（就是你選擇的立意方向）

句子為： And the caption just reminds us the significance of 文章的主題.

劃重點

根據以往五大類話題，提供以下五套模板。橫線部分需要酌情替換

環保類

As is vividly depicted in the picture, there are/is sb doing sth. With…, sb is doing sth. (追加一句詳述圖畫細節)Below the picture, there is a caption that reads: “______”.

The aim of the cartoon is to illustrate that environmental protection deserves our immediate attention. For one thing, natural environment is the basis of human existence on which we are completely dependent. In other words, hardly can we survive if the environment is severely polluted. For another, with the pollution of air, water and other natural resources, the environment has been almost damaged to the point where it cannot support the normal life of human being. If there were no pleasant ecological environment, we could never taste the real happiness of life.

With the situation being so serious, it is high time that immediate and consistent actions were taken by the departments concerned. To begin with, the government is expected to enact laws to raise the awareness of environmental protection. More importantly, everyone, especially, the visitors, are supposed to take efforts to remold their attitudes towards our environment and protect it with their utmost efforts.

三段結尾也可以 詳述建議

當然這個不僅僅是環保，絕大部分話題均可用 （模板）

On the basis of the above-mentioned analyses, we would like to present the following suggestion regarding environment protection. For one thing, regulations should be formulated to encourage the practice of environment protection. For another, educational campaigns should be launched among the public, especially the young, to raise their awareness of environment protection. Only in these ways can a harmonious society as well as better personal life be expected soon.

態度哲理類

As is vividly depicted in the picture，there are/is sb doing sth. With…, sb is doing sth. (追加一句詳述圖畫細節) The caption reminds the significance of 文章的主題.

Everyone in the society has, to some extent, benefited from 文章的主題. When it comes to this topic, I can think of no better example than the selfless medical staff during their medical support to high-risk areas. When the whole country was afflicted with covid-19, these noble men and women overworked day and night and risked their own lives in order to save more infected patients regardless of daunting challenges. Without their 好的精神, we would not have survived this public health crisis in such a short period of time.

Nourished by文章的主題, all the members in the society tend to be樂觀積極/堅韌自信…., which will in turn make the world a better place.

文化教育類

As is vividly depicted in the picture，there are/is sb doing sth. With…, sb is doing sth. (追加一句詳述圖畫細節) The caption reminds the significance of 文章的主題.

The cartoonist, from my perspective, may seek to draw our attention to the reality that文章主旨 deserves our immediate attention. Two reasons may account for this phenomenon. In the first place, 相關人物（人們 / 當代大學生等）are under immense peer pressure as a consequence of the bruising competition. As is known to all, better jobs and even higher wages are probably associated with excellent performance in academic field. Secondly, certain trend in society also exerts an adverse impact. Youngsters are easily tempted by instant fame and immediate financial rewards around them, thus neglecting the importance of continuous academic efforts.

In the light of the aforementioned discussions, some measures should be employed to tackle this issue. For individuals, it is imperative for them to think about the big picture instead of focusing on the short-term benefits of 主題中不好的一面. Furthermore, the whole society is obliged to set more ideal examples and encourage the young to be主題中好的一面. And concerted efforts will definitely usher in a more harmonious society.

親子關系類

As is vividly depicted in the picture, there are/is sb doing sth. With_____, sb is doing sth. Below the picture, there is a caption that reads: “_____”.

Actually, the aim of the picture is to illustrate that 主題詞（比如filial piety） is of great significance and deserves to be promoted actively. For one thing, this virtue, passed down from generation to generation, is one of our most precious possessions. By obeying this code of conduct, we can cultivate the sense of responsibility and enjoy the time spent with our dearest ones. For another thing, such merit, if practiced extensively, will become a positive factor in promoting the good functioning of our entire society. In other words, this trait is remarkably beneficial to building a harmonious and civilized society.

In conclusion, the virtue of主題詞（比如respecting the old）will never be outdated and this trait can exert advantageous influence on both our society and every individual. Therefore, whatever situations we are confronted with, we must bear it in mind to assume the due responsibility for our parents. Only in this way can we witness a more sound and harmonious society.

社會科技類

As is vividly depicted in the picture, there are/is sb doing sth. With_____, sb is doing sth. Below the picture, there is a caption that reads: “_____”.

There are a number of factors accounting for this phenomenon. And I would like to emphasize the following ones. First and foremost, owing to the universal existence of 主題 詞, people tend to overuse (主題詞壞的一面), gradually the disadvantages of…(主題詞)outweigh its advantages. Secondly, conveniences and high efficiency brought by (主題詞)are so attractive that some people rely too much on it, which makes it possible for some people to overlook the problem of (主題詞帶來潛在的威脅/負面影響等), especially when they indulge in it. A case in point is…(可根據個人情況添加事例).

Based on the analyses above, we may draw a conclusion that so long as we take full advantage of …(主題詞)and be on high alert to guard against the side effects, we will certainly solve/address similar problems/difficulties effectively and easily.

? 注

1如果寫個人選擇話題，一般結尾都可以寫 選擇最適合自己的 不要盲從

It is hard to decide which one is the best choice for all of us, thus it is advisable to follow your hear and stich to whatever that suits you the most.

2如果寫科技類 一般結尾都可以寫 科技是雙刃劍 我們要正確對待科技 趨利避害

主題 is analogous to a double-edged sword but it all depends on us how to use it. If handled properly, it(代指主題) will definitely facilitate our life.

3 如果寫文化 一般結尾都可以寫 以我為主 取其精華去其糟粕

There are good reasons to embrace foreign cultures on the ground that our cultures can be unprecedentedly enriched in the long run by observing the world from different perspectives. However, confronted with different cultures, we should be sensible enough to absorb its essence and resist the unfavorable impact.

4以前考過舉例論證 所以以下人物實例僅作參考

Winston Churchill (persistence/perseverance)

Mother Teresa (love)

Beethoven (challenges/faith)

Xie An (education/model)

George Washington (integrity/faith)

Kobe Bryant (practice)

Marco Polo (culture convergence)

vehicles/fossil fuels/plastic bags (technology)

5 文采 警句諺語

Never say die.

Like father, like son.

As you sow, so will you reap.

No cross, no crown.

No pains, no gains.

Man proposes, god disposes.

Where there is a will, there is a way.

A bird in hand is worth two in the bush.

An idle youth, a needy age.

Constant dropping wears away the stone.

Every little helps.

Never too old to learn, never too late to turn.

A fall in pit, a gain in wit.

Every coin has two sides.

二 模擬練習 （橫線為 可積累素材）

社會熱點 科技

As is vividly demonstrated in the cartoon, three children are joyfully playing with a robot, which continues to output data from its built-in devices. What we can conclude from this picture is that with the presence of robots and modern household appliances, people’s living standards have been improved and they are able to enjoy a better life.

There are two reasons accounting for the widespread usage of these devices. For one thing, thanks to the constant technological innovation and advancement, the price of most tech products have been greatly lowered and a wide range of products are categorized to suit every pocket, which enable an increasing number of families to have these devices around them. For another, the fast pace of modern life is exerting mounting pressure on people, and most of them work overtime willingly or unwillingly almost every day, which leaves them little time and energy to do domestic chores. Therefore, there is a growing demand for outside help from tech products, saving users a lot of time and even boosting their happiness.

To sum up, in the light of the accessibility of modern tech products by most consumers and people’s hectic life, there is an admittedly upward trend in the prevalent use of robots and other devices.

此處可套模板 用雙刃劍結尾

Undeniably, technology is analogous to a double-edged sword but it all depends on us how to use it. If handled properly, high technology will definitely facilitate our life.

文化交流

As is vividly depicted in the drawing, in the middle of the cartoon stand a group people from different cultures in different dresses, hand in hand. How impressive the picture is in describing the reality that a unique culture is getting increasingly interconnected with another one, which ultimately contributes to cultural diversity.

Each and every day, millions of people are interacting with foreigners from another culture, be it face-to-face or on the Internet, and this trend is even pushed by international transactions and globalization. And the inevitable result--cultural diversity, will benefit every one of us in ways big and small as it has done. Admittedly, cultural diversity creates richness in our opinions. Some challenges facing the world today may be so daunting that they require the input of people from different cultural backgrounds if we are to succeed, because the cooperation of a diverse group will always offer fresh ideas to solve problems.

此處可套模板 取其精華棄其糟粕

In my opinion, the culture of any country is an indispensable part of the world’s spiritual wealth, which should be delicately preserved and cherished. Meanwhile, there are good reasons to embrace foreign cultures on the ground that our cultures can be unprecedentedly enriched in the long run by observing the world from different perspectives. However, confronted with different cultures, we should be sensible enough to absorb its essence and resist the unfavorable impact. Only in this way can we promote cultural integration in the real sense, thus making our life better.

思想態度 愛心

用愛心澆筑愛心

So striking is the cartoon above that a person is watering the garden plants with a water jug shaped like a red heart, and the act of watering turns the plants into heart-shaped flowers. The caption reminds us of the power of love and its strong influence on people.

Everyone in the society has benefited from others’ goodness to a certain extent. When it comes to the topic of love, I can think of no better example than the selfless medical staff during their medical support to high-risk areas. When the whole country was afflicted with covid-19, these noble men and women overworked day and night and risked their own lives in order to save more infected patients. Without their sacrifice and generosity, we would not have survived this public health crisis in such a short period of time.

Nourished by the goodness of other people, all the members in the society tend to be grateful and caring, which will in turn make the world a better place.