作文話題梳理 一、 暢想未來 相關作文題目 開頭 18奉賢：Imagine 2023 作文A. As time goes by, there are going to be big changes in our everyday life. It＇s exciting to?imagine?what the life will be like in 2023. 18虹口、松江：I’m looking forward to my new school life/being more confident (in 2023) 作文B,C,D,E . After half a year, I will be a senior high school student. I think my senior high school life will be full of excitement. In my opinion, confidence is a magic power which can push me?forward?. 作文A: 1. We are in a high-speed-developing world and technology is improving all the time. 2. Maybe two years later, in 2023, our life will be extremely different. 3. Schools will probably start more online lessons and students are required to finish more homework on the Internet so that we can save much paper. 4. Electric cars will be more popular and there will be less traffic because most citizens will travel by public transportation. 5. Scientists may manage to build a base on the moon to discover new resources and make the planet possible for people to live on. 6. The hope for future is beautiful and everyone should work hard to make it come true. 作文B: 1. I think there will be great changes in 2023. On one hand, in the second half of 2023, I will study in my dream senior high school. 2. My ideal senior high school life will be full of extra activities to broaden my view, such as debate competition, educational exchange and so on. 3. On the other hand, I will be fond of improving my abilities to achieve my goals. 4. Although I might meet with difficulties, I will spare no efforts to overcome them. 5. Where there is a will, there is a way. 6. I believe that I will have a wonderful life in 2023. 7. I’m quite looking forward to it. 二、 個人經歷 相關作文題目 開頭 18長寧：My unforgettable/special experience in classroom activities 作文C,D,E. Everybody has some?experience?he can’t forget. For me, the most?unforgettable experience was taking part?in?an?... contest in our class. 18金山：The change(s) my friend has brought me 作文C. G. Since the moment we were born, all of us have been influenced by many people. Among them, my dear?...?has brought me a meaningful change which benefits me a lot. 18徐匯：My happy moment with my friend/my parents 作文C. Time flies, it’s a long time since I had my happy moment with?...?during?... 18浦東：The beauty in my life 作文C.F.G. Many beautiful things happen round us every day. We just need bright eyes to find them. still remember one thing which has affected me for a long time. 17普陀：My favourite activity at the School Science/Art/English…)Festival 作文C. In my daily life, I always take part in various kinds of school activities, but my favourite one is …..at the school Science/Art/English Festival. 17徐匯：When I grow up（“當我長大后”） 成長對你意味著什么?長大后的你會是怎么樣? 作文D. Growing up means our spiritual maturity.?（轉第2句) 17虹口：Besides study, I also pay attention to volunteer work 作文E. In my view, I can be improved by doing some volunteer work besides study. 17青浦：I try, I grow 作文E (不用加開頭)、作文C. I used to be timid and it was hard for me to talk to people. 17 崇明：I am proud of myself 作文C,E. I’m proud of myself because I overcame the shyness/timidity successfully. 17嘉定：I want to give my mother a gift 作文C.D. My mother is the person who loves me most in the world, so I want to give her a gift. That is the prize I got in the … competition. 作文C: 1. Last December, our English teacher held a debating/speech contest. 2. (I became the leader of our debating team.) 3. I felt extremely nervous as soon as I stood on the stage. (*=No sooner had I stood on the stage than I felt extremely nervous.) 4. My best friend (and teammate), Lily, was so kind that she comforted me and gave me a smile. 5. During the process, her smile always encouraged me until the end of the debate/speech. 6. Finally I succeeded in giving the speech on the stage. 7. This activity also made me interested in learning English by enabling me to do something different besides doing exercises. 8. The reason why I keep this activity in memory is that it can not only strengthen my confidence but also bring me a precious friendship 作文D：
1. Hope is something that can give us strength when we meet with failure or in a bad situation. 2. Once I took part in a very important violin competition. 3. Despite/In spite of months of hard practice, I didn＇t win any prize, which made me upset 4. I decided that I would not let failure keep me in the shadow. 5. So I walked out of my room and picked up the violin again. 6. Today I＇m glad I didn＇t give up. 7. I know I should be positive when I meet difficulties. 作文E：
1. I used to be timid and it was hard for me to talk to people. 2. But I changed a lot because of the experience of being a volunteer. 3. When I went to the local orphanage/children’s hospital for the first time, I was really shy and could hardly say any words to the children there at first. 4. Then I tried to show them some handicrafts(手工藝). 5. To my great joy, they were all interested in them. 6. So I decided to teach them some simple skills, such as paper cutting. 7. As a teacher, I had to talk to them and told them how to cut different shapes. 8. Gradually I found I could talk with any of them freely. 9. I was very proud of myself when they could successfully cut the paper into different beautiful shapes. 10. We had a good time that day, and I even made friends with some of them. 11. From then on, I am not shy any more. 12. This experience brings me confidence and courage, which enables me to meet different people and make new friends. 三、 人物（感恩） 相關作文題目 開頭 18徐匯：The person I respect most 17松江：I want to say “Thank you” to my mother 作文F. I am really thankful to my mother from the bottom of my heart so that I want to say “Thank you” to her. (轉第3句) 18閔行：My mother/My friend has changed me 作文F.G My mother/friend always encourages me and changes my views and attitude towards life．? 作文F：
1. Everyone has been changed by others more or less. 2. I’d like to give my great thanks to my mother. 3. She is the person who has changed me a lot. 4. In the past, when in face of difficulties, I always wanted to give up. 5. Although I had a strong willing(意愿) of being successful, I was afraid that I couldn’t do that. 6. My mother told me, “Life is just like climbing a mountain. When you get to the top, you can have a bird view of all things and you’ll be amazed at how beautiful the view is.”? 7. It is my mother’s silent support and encouragement that make me myself now. 作文G：
1. I think friendship makes me feel the beauty in my life. 2. When we are in trouble, friends can help us overcome those difficulties in life. 3. When we feel happy, we hope there is someone who can share our happiness. 4. In my view, a good friend is not just the one to play with, but to help each other. 5. Jenny, a friend of mine, has changed me in many ways. 6. I still remember the day when I failed a competition. 7. She was the only one who came towards me and comforted me a lot. 8. She encouraged me to learn to be stronger and more careful. 9. From then on, I have kept a positive attitude towards life. 10. I’m not afraid of being defeated any more. 11. I am grateful/thankful to her all the time. 四、 興趣愛好 相關作文題目 開頭 18嘉定：Reading brings me happiness 作文H.I In my opinion, reading brings me the most happiness,( which can add colour to my life). 作文H：
1. I’m fond of reading for various reasons. 2. First, Reading is an attractive activity which is also instructive. 3. It can expand my knowledge and help me know the outside world of my study. 4. I’ve known about some famous scenic spots through my reading and some interesting customs and culture about some nations. 5. Second, reading is a healthy way to relax. 6. It’s much better than watching TV or playing video games which do harm to our eyes. 7. What’s more, I believe the more I read, the wiser I will be. 8. Reading makes my life more colorful and meaningful. 9. I’m glad it’s reading that brings me happiness. 作文I：
1. What I like most is reading books. 2. If I read widely, I will be rich in knowledge. 3. Besides, it is good way to learn things that can’t be found easily in our life. 4. Reading is to the mind what exercise is to the body. ?讀書對思維就像鍛煉對身體一樣(重要). 5. Reading books is so beautiful/wonderful that it seems as if I am taken into another world. 6. Through reading, I can gain some valuable experience, which will be useful to my future career. 7. Whenever I feel sad or worried, I will read books to get rid of the bad feelings. 8. Moreover, it can help me strengthen my confidence. 9. To sum up, it not only enriches my life but also broadens my view. 五、 提出建議 問題（problems/trouble/difficulty）——個人 解決方法(solutions) 1. I have some trouble/difficulty in memorizing English words. 2. My biggest problem is that I often made some mistakes in grammar. 3. I also want to have a better understanding of the English articles. 1. Now I have found some ways to improve my English. It’s my pleasure to share them with you. 2. Above all, you should always believe in yourself if you want to learn English well. 3. You can build your confidence by learning what is easy first. 4. Secondly, forming good learning habits is of great value(很有價值的),such as reading at least three times a day. 5. What’s more, it’s necessary to write down the new words you have learned each day and take notes in class. 問題（problems/trouble/difficulty）——他人 解決方法(solutions) 1. In your letter, you told me that your deskmate was always trying to chat with you when having classes and you didn’t know how to deal with the problem. 1. So I would like to give you some advice. First, you can just be frank(坦誠的)and tell him talking is not allowed in class. 2. Meanwhile, you should remind(提醒) him of the importance of concentration. 3. If these methods do not work, you may ask your teachers for help. 4. Tom sum up, the present situation must be improved so that both of you can study more efficiently. 六、 建議信：
開頭常用句型：
1. I am so sorry to hear that you have trouble/difficulty/problems with your deskmate. 2. It’s my great pleasure to give you some suggestions/advice/tips. 3. Here are a few suggestions. 4. So?I?would?like?to?give?you?some?advice.? 表達建議常用句式：
5. First, why not…?/What about …? 6. If you do this, you will/can……. 7. Secondly, you should/can/had better… 8. In this way,… 9. Thirdly, it would be a good idea if… 10. By doing this,…… 結尾常用句型：
11. These are my suggestions. I hope you will find them useful/helpful. 12. I will appreciate your consideration of my advice/suggestions/tips. 13. I am looking forward to your reply.